Sukhpal, you show some awareness of layout and organisation. You begin to apply your understanding of media conventions. Your masthead needs to be filled with a darker colour as it is blended into the background and as a result isn't prominent enough. The strap line should read 'success for all through hard work and harmony' so needs correcting. There is also an error with reference to your strap line - tips on organis? You need to have one central image and this needs to be a medium close up shot. The key feature and headline for the magazine will need to relate to this main image. Try and avoid blocking the strap lines at the bottom of the page. They usually appear down the sides of the page. Revisit the examples you analysed to consider the conventions of strap lines. Some more detail would be useful with reference to some of the strap lines - for example, important dates - what important dates?
Sukhpal, you show some awareness of layout and organisation. You begin to apply your understanding of media conventions.
ReplyDeleteYour masthead needs to be filled with a darker colour as it is blended into the background and as a result isn't prominent enough.
The strap line should read 'success for all through hard work and harmony' so needs correcting. There is also an error with reference to your strap line - tips on organis?
You need to have one central image and this needs to be a medium close up shot. The key feature and headline for the magazine will need to relate to this main image.
Try and avoid blocking the strap lines at the bottom of the page. They usually appear down the sides of the page. Revisit the examples you analysed to consider the conventions of strap lines.
Some more detail would be useful with reference to some of the strap lines - for example, important dates - what important dates?