You need a title of the artist and an introduction to offer some brief background to the artist detailing who he is and his accomplishments and why he's appearing in your magazine. Have a look at some existing articles to see what I mean. Where will your centre fold be? You need to think about this - you will need to fold the page in half so the text cannot run across the middle of the page - you need to consider using tighter columns or you may need to take some of the content out. The image doesn't look very clear - is there something you can do with this? Why is the last line of each answer indented? The font in the second column is smaller and it looks like you've tried to squeeze too much in - you need to ensure that your font is a consistent size throughout. You need to proof read your writing more carefully and address your typos. Avoid using text speak - LOL. Instead use (laughs out loud) in brackets. You need to number the second page too.
You need a title of the artist and an introduction to offer some brief background to the artist detailing who he is and his accomplishments and why he's appearing in your magazine. Have a look at some existing articles to see what I mean.
ReplyDeleteWhere will your centre fold be? You need to think about this - you will need to fold the page in half so the text cannot run across the middle of the page - you need to consider using tighter columns or you may need to take some of the content out.
The image doesn't look very clear - is there something you can do with this?
Why is the last line of each answer indented?
The font in the second column is smaller and it looks like you've tried to squeeze too much in - you need to ensure that your font is a consistent size throughout.
You need to proof read your writing more carefully and address your typos.
Avoid using text speak - LOL. Instead use (laughs out loud) in brackets.
You need to number the second page too.